NRI#1 - Gate of Fate
Once upon a time long long ago so long ago that no one knows how long
ago lived a King.He was ruling province which was full of wealth and
the people in the province were happy with their ruler.That King has
got nothing to do with our story so we better leave him alone,ok lets
discuss about the Kings of our story,By King i meant Heroes of our
story.Yup we have two Heroes in our story and they are twins but still
they are not look alikes.The eldest of the twin is called Nikhil AKA
Nikhz and the younger hero is called Rahul AKA Raul.They are just
extraordinary 7th graders who cause all sorts of troubles around them
with their quickwitted brain.I think its enough of the introduction
and we should move into the story.
One fine morning,it was sunny as usual and the weather was
great.Everyone(almost) i the city were happy except few people cause
it was the monday of the first week of June,I hope that everyone knows
who are upset at the first week of june.Now lets get to the plot :P.
In the entrance of the school,students were flowing in like busy bees
returning to their hives.They were carrying loads of books that almost
broke their spinal chord.Suddenly!!! an Autorickshaw at the entrance
of the school..............
Out from the autorickshaw comes.................
"Maahn is that a tornado?? or is it a big tsunami??
[Nikhz::Shut it you idiot!!! We expected a bigger build up for us,but
you come with stupid things like Tornado and tsunami......
Me::Ooops....Sorry guys will do it better nxt time...]
So with a totally flopped yet powerful build up enters our kings"Nikhz
n Raul d invincibles"But wait....wait a moment ...........
Oohh .what the hell is this .........their faces are so dull,this
means trouble for everyone[Put on ur safety goggles].
"Maahn i hate this place especially at this period of the year"said
Nikhz."Dont talk as if you are the only person feeling it"snapped
Raul."Look at this place,its just like a poultry farm,chicken gets
feeded and they lay their eggs and we students are taught and we get
our marks"said Nikhz"So you think that we are made into
chickens??"asked Raul."No i think Shri is the chicken here because he
is writing this all sorts of this boring conversation"answered
Nikhz."Yup i thought so"agreed Raul.
"Oh no.....I hate this place,it reminds me of the lecture that dad
gives at start of every year"moaned Raul."Gate of Fate" said Raul and
Nikhz in Unison ~ "When you enter into the gate it decides how you
shape your life when you come out of it" ~ ."Whatever it maybe but its
certainly one gate that i hate"said Raul."After all SCHOOLS ARE FOR
FOOLS is our theory lets see who suffers this year.........." their
speech faded away as they entered their GATE OF FATE.
Wednesday, March 17, 2010
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9 comments:
lol its supercool :P but i am in 10th :x :P anywayz the post is cool :P
U ROCK SHRI !! AND HELLO EVERYONE.. I AM RAUL and the person called Nikhil the shadeslayer is NIkhz the chaman :P
Awesome maaahn Loved it completely
and the beginning is superb
great post maahn
I hope I'll be the part of ur next story! at-least as a sidekick or maybe assistant of the sidekick! :P
Awesome work man , keep scribblin :).i xpct more frm u :p
yeah i too wud love to be part of your story
@Kush N Mayank
all my frnds are part of the story :) even i'm a part of the story :P
@Kush
NO WAY!! :P you wont be sidekick you'll kick others aside bro ;) v'll come into the story soon.
@All
Thanks for ur comments it has really encouraged me :),hopefully i'll write the next part soon :)
but I AND NIKHz are the er..heroes of the story :| :| :P
@Rahul
U are the heroes man :P that doesn't mean others should be sidekicks :P we are part of the story too but you people are the heroes :)
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